I love this!!! I'm feeling so lucky I stumbled upon your story because it's been a couple paragraphs and I'm already so invested? Your writing is amazing and it reads like a fairytale. I can't wait to see where the story goes!!!
Oh, I’ll babble at you to no end—so no need to thank me! :D
It’s cool that you’re open to both sides of that tension—wanting to keep the emotional truth intact while also listening for where a reader might drift. If you figure it out, let me know. That balance is so hard to strike without losing the soul of it.
But I like the vibe so far!
And yeah… grief can be strangely unifying. I feel it. I’m really curious to see how the “curse” grows from here.
I will certainly let you know. So very true - grief is common to all of us. Connecting on matters like that can be very powerful - and hopefully healing. Thanks so much again… hope you enjoy the journey!
What a delightful beginning.
Thank you so much, Kim!!
Welcome to Serials of The Week #20!
Thanks Ian!
my pleasure!
By reading Chapter 1, this story is intriguing. I will continue reading, hopefully everyday.
Thank you!! I hope you enjoy it!
Ooh! I’ve been looking for a serialized fiction and I’m so glad to have found it through you!
So happy to hear that! Please enjoy!!
Really like this, I'll be reading more!
Thank you!! Happy to hear it!
YESSS! Clean fairy tale serial fiction?? I'm in!!!
Thanks LJ!!
I really enjoyed this! Will be reading more!
Thank you so much, Alison! I appreciate it!
Ooh a serial lucky meeee
Haha, I hope you enjoy it!!
Oh my! Awesome hook!!
Thank you Becky! Sorry I missed your comment until now. Thanks for reading!
Leaving me with ‘it was all my fault’ —- agh!!!!!!! I want more!
Haha, keep going, Hunter!! :)
“It was all my fault.” Oooo, love it, will continue reading your other posts as time permits.
Awesome! :) Thank you for reading!!
I love this!!! I'm feeling so lucky I stumbled upon your story because it's been a couple paragraphs and I'm already so invested? Your writing is amazing and it reads like a fairytale. I can't wait to see where the story goes!!!
Thank you so much!! That means a lot! I hope you enjoy the journey! :)
Very interesting beginning. Enjoyed the writing a lot!
Thank you so much, Anne-Marie!!
Her name is not Rumpelstiltskinina by any chance, is it?
Haha it isn’t, but that’s a great guess!
This is so intriguing! Wow, what an opener to a story. Love all the vibes!
I’m so glad you like it, Joseph! Thanks for reading!!
Oh, I’ll babble at you to no end—so no need to thank me! :D
It’s cool that you’re open to both sides of that tension—wanting to keep the emotional truth intact while also listening for where a reader might drift. If you figure it out, let me know. That balance is so hard to strike without losing the soul of it.
But I like the vibe so far!
And yeah… grief can be strangely unifying. I feel it. I’m really curious to see how the “curse” grows from here.
I’ll be catching up slowly, but I’m all in.
I will certainly let you know. So very true - grief is common to all of us. Connecting on matters like that can be very powerful - and hopefully healing. Thanks so much again… hope you enjoy the journey!