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Anoushka's avatar

i'm so in love with this!!! i love the fairy tale vibes and your writing. the main character's such an easy person to like, and i'm really looking forward to more of her backstory and the event that led to her getting cursed.

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Okay, I’m officially hooked.

You know, I absolutely adore your voice. It takes me back to something deep in my teenage brain—maybe the first time I read Lewis or Tolkien, or cracked open a Steve Jackson gamebook. There's something timeless about it. The kind of storytelling that feels told, not written.

Now that I’ve hit chapter three, I feel comfortable gushing just a bit: what you’re doing here isn’t just interesting—it’s rare. There’s a quiet confidence in how you build this world. The dream-logic, the restraint, the emotional current underneath… it’s deeply admirable. If I tried to write something like this, I’d probably overdo it. (I'd definitely overdo it.) But you don’t. You trust the atmosphere—the mythology—to carry the weight, and it does.

Also… I’d buy this book. No hesitation. (Naomi Novik might be the closest thing to this right now—but only loosely, in tone and her current folklore inspirations.)

This chapter in particular felt right in lockstep with its own theme. (I appreciate the three and three.) I do think chapter one could use a little expanding now, but that’s more of a gut check than a critique—something to revisit once I finish the rest—It just feels like it could become a stronger “anchor” before the encounters start.

Anyway. I’m having a great time catching up—one chapter at a time.

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