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Anoushka's avatar

im loving reading about their encounters with all of these vastly different but struggling people (or trolls and giants)

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

So glad to hear it!! I never know quite who they’ll run into next, lol.

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[ 2D ]'s avatar

This one, in particular, is so relevant. I think a lot of my internal pain comes from this exact place--I have a hard time leaving the trolls behind. You captured them perfectly, too… I feel bad for them, even when I shouldn’t. And yet--there’s an enchanted lake the other way. Maybe it’s time I stop trying to heal the trolls… and just leave them to their bridge.

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

I feel bad for the trolls, too… but they have to decide that they want to fix their bridge. It’s their business, you know? Tough to walk away from, though!

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[ 2D ]'s avatar

It is their business… and still, this strikes such a deep chord. You know my troll pain—I’ve rambled at you about it plenty. It’s hard to stop caring, even when I’ve already made it to the lake. Poor trollies... and me... still learning how to walk away. 😉

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

I totally get that :)

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Ryan Small's avatar

I also wrote a troll story this week, but it was a little bit of social commentary. Thanks for the take your take, it was snappy and refreshing. https://substack.com/@ryansmall1/note/c-98768334?r=5cxmjp&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

Thank you Ryan! I appreciate it! Your story’s got good irony in it :)

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✧ jessi ✧'s avatar

Beautiful 👌🏾 loved it!!

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

Thank you Cooki! I so appreciate it!

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Shadowed Ink's avatar

I love this. Thank you for sharing it.

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

I appreciate that! Thanks so much for reading!!

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Zach Hindes's avatar

That was so refreshing to read.

Where do you get your art? Love how this and the others look.

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

Thanks so much, Zach! I use Midjourney for my images.

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Zach Hindes's avatar

I’m not typically a fan of AI but whatever prompts you put in are doing the job. The horse one from a few posts back is excellent.

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

It wasn’t my first choice either. I was using stock photos for a while but they really didn’t speak to the story. If I repackage these stories later, I’d love to hire an illustrator… but I’m not able to while my fiction is still free 99. :)

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Zach Hindes's avatar

Totally! And plus, they’ll give the illustrator a great jumping off point. Enjoying the format - feels like a fairy tale in the best way.

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

Yes! Ah, thank you so much!

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James Bailey's avatar

Beautiful. To be a victim or to be empowered.

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Anna McKenzie's avatar

Precisely. :) Thank you for reading, James!

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